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A Poem A Week - For Stink & Pipsqueak 08/03/2010
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So I'm doing the prayer thing.

I'm slowing down.

I'm attempting to meditate

But honestly, people, I'm happiest when I'm firing on all cylinders.

And so, I'm back to setting goals for myself.

One of them is to finally write those books I'm talking about.

One book is under wraps, but I'll tell you that I'm bugging the lovely (and extremely gifted artist) Arwen to illustrate. (She's already
published one book and seriously, the front cover does not do her illustrations justice.)

But the other, just for kicks and giggles, is going to be a book of poems
Shel Silverstein style.

I by no means and comparing myself to that genius tale spinner, but I am attempting to write poems based on my crazy kids that I can pass down to them..

Here's one of five I've written. Tell me what you think.

Pink Umbrella

Mom said kids might laugh at me

And even cause a scuffle

If I took this umbrella to school with me

It’s pink (and it has a ruffle)

 “Honey, sweetie…” she said, “You know I don’t care...

But since you’re a boy… some kids might stare

So here’s a small tip that I have for you:

Be prepared with a response that works for you.”

My mom’s pretty sharp so I thought of an answer

‘Bout why boys could wear pink and could sing and be dancers

So when Markus asked, “Man, why are you carrying THAT?”

I said, “Friend, can’t you see that some girls don’t have hats?

I don’t want their hair-do’s to get wet in the rain

So I’ll walk them to class and they’ll never complain.”

And then while he stood there, kind of biting his lips

I decided to get one more thing in real quick

“My papa says girls like the boys who can groove

So if I save their hair then one day you’ll see, Dude,

That I’ll have a dance date whenever I please”

And then something happened that you wouldn’t believe

At school the next day… under those rainy day showers

Marcus brought an umbrella – it was purple… with flowers





 
 


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Arwen link
08/04/2010 05:00

Lol. That poem is awesome.

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Stacey
08/04/2010 10:17

Love it! Seriously, it is right up there with that poem about the sharp-toothed snail inside everyone's nose (my son memorized and recited that one for homeschool group!). I cannot wait til the book comes out. You think we can get a signed copy?

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Maggie link
08/04/2010 11:52

Now that has a definite Silverstein flair. It's fun, silly, good rhythm and appealing to kids. I would want a book of poems like this for my kids. Go go go!

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Laree link
08/04/2010 12:22

I think it's great. Any time a poem makes me laugh it deserves a great big thumbs up!

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Deb link
08/04/2010 20:30

Ha!! Love it! Write that book - Go for it!! And I don't know about you but I am COMPLETELY lost without having goals....I flounder and accomplish nothing :(

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Just Jiff link
08/05/2010 06:47

LOVE IT!
Shel Silverstein is my fave (I LOVE "Runny Babbit" the most) but I would totally buy your book. LOVE that poem!

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Carrie link
08/06/2010 15:07

I love it!

And the slowing down is good...very, very good. I hope to follow your lead. :)

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Lynette link
08/11/2010 21:29

Love the poem. And oh my, your kids are wonderful!!!

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yogurt link
08/20/2010 11:25

Love it! Your kids will love it even more. A wonderful treasure trove, a book of poems.

I had a thought, however. If you're serious about publishing, seems like I read someone's blog post where she submitted something for pub, she was made to inform whether her poems/prose had been published anywhere, in any forum, blog included. If they had, then they wouldn't publish. Here is the post I read:

http://motherscribe.blogspot.com/2009/03/is-poem-considered-published-if-it.html

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